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Paradise Found...Part 3

pollypencil_75
By: pollypencil
Mood: in love
Date: 02/14/2008 13:54:24
Music: None


Looking up, Lisa could see her pain reflected in the man's eyes. For the first time in months she didn't feel alone, she felt the unbearable burden begin to lift from her, only a bit but it was a start. She began to believe that maybe she had a future after all and maybe it could be with this man, with his kind hazel eyes, wet with their shared tears. 

     They had come here to dissolve their marriage but maybe there was hope. Lisa stood up and took James by the hand and led him away from the bar towards the beech where they had made their vows to each other three years ago. Tomorrow she would cancel the divorce; tonight they would work on renewing their promises.




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Warren8 02/15/2008 07:01:03
  I think it's great that more of us are actually writing stories and poems on these blogs.  Good, concise treatment off the pain of loss and the mystery of reinvention.